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NoFearJustFaith
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Yesterday morning I was sitting on the porch watching a beautiful warm rain and I told God that I would love to write something beautiful to him or about him. This is what came to my heart so I thought I would share.

 

The Greatest Love Story

Since before there was time
You saw the color of my eye.

Before I saw Grace,
You saw your beloveds pain.

You shaped the world
Brought light to dark
Brought the seas out of the heavens

All with your eye on me.

When I stumbled and fell
You left Paradise
Determined in your love for me.
Walked into my pain
All the while with your eye on me.

I needed a way out
And without a second thought
You walked down the path that led me home.

The tree that weighed you down
Was my weight in your arms
As you carried me from the chains
You kept your ever loving eye on me.

Oh hallelujah - I followed my love from the grave
And you stood in all your glory
In beautiful magnificence

Still with your eye on me.

And I shall live in your love
Shouting your name on high
My love, my love!
My eye will be on you! - Larita

 

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Beautiful prose and lovely sentiment.  Thanks for sharing.

Indeed God's salvation plan and sending the Son for us all is surely the greatest story ever told.  But greater still is the "Greatest Love Story"!

Before we were each formed into our mother's womb's, we were already a finished work in His heart!

Again, man has neither the quality or quantity of words to describe His glory.  His glory is more than an attribute, or a term to describe His work, it is who and what He is!!!

TR

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Thank you TR.

"His glory is more than an attribute, or a term to describe His work, it is who and what He is!!!"  ----   Yes! Yes!

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Beautifully written :good:

I’m enjoying all the writing talent :mail:  on this forum board. B-)

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Whether on this site or only in my heart, may the Lord be glorified!

And as passionate that I am about this being my foremost prayer , I am just as passionate about my heartfelt expressions of the love for you all that Christ has seeded into my heart!

Love & blessings...Tender Reed

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